Thursday, August 29, 2013

PLN 1 redo

summary
The video “A vision of students today” by Michael Wesch suggests that without technology that is not advanced students in college and other grades will not be able to learn as well as with the up to date technology. The video states that most kids are also wasting there time on such technology like facebook and laptops students are not producing as high quality work of not even working at all. The video also states that students are being prepared for jobs that do not even exist yet and so if we do not continue to advance and move forward then those jobs won't be there and then the students will have no work.  The video also states that many students are several thousand dollars in debt for classes they won't attend and books that they won't read.  


response
I disagree with the idea that education isn't always relevant to a students life because if your are going to get a well paying job then you need a good education.  Education is always relevant to a students career and life.  if the student does not focus in school then when they get older they won't be able to get a well paying job to support their families.  when you want to get a good quality job then you have to make you education relevant to your life. Most jobs will hire you if you have a collage degree as opposed to if you have a high school diploma. Also you will get a much more well paying to with a collage degree and if you want/need to go to collage then you need to have the materials such as a laptop and smartphone and you need to have all of these items in the classroom and need to learn how to control the use of them. Everything that all students need to know is that everything that the need to learn is in a book some were the only reason that there is a teacher is because the students need a a way to learn it. education is always relevant in our lives especially if you want to go get a high paying job and be able to support a family and have a nice house that is why education is relevant to your life.

26 comments:

  1. Anthony-

    Good ideas in your summary, but your points in your summary don't support your topic sentence. Also, make sure to proofread. You have a personal word, a number of run-on sentences, and sentences that need clarification. If you need help editing, come in.

    As far as your response, once again, you have good ideas, but we need to proofread. Your topic sentence needs the title, and author. Your points need to connect to the video as well as real life. Make sure you eliminate personal words.

    Please redo.

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  2. I like the calm tone you are using it sets the mood for this subject

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  3. Good questions at the beginning and end. Good connections from the text to the audience and text to self. The ending was a little awkward by just ending it without a confident ending.

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  4. Good connections. Don't put your hands in your pocket.

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  5. good job showing how people have their own decision but if they do not try they will succeed as much

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  6. Good attention getter, nice question. Kept eye contact most of the time and you only looked back at the board a couple times.

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  7. You had some really good points. You spoke calmly. And you were very assertive about what can happen without schooling. Well done! The one negative was the looking backwards slowed you up, maybe a note card next time will help.

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  8. Good connections and being one sided, and good examples calm voice nice movement, too short, good homeschooling advice

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  9. did you ever consider the fact that a lot of very wealthy people are high school drop outs.

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    1. very few people are wealthy and high school drop outs

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  10. Good opening question. You keep looking at the board. Good ending question

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  11. You kept your calm, and had a great question at the end.

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  12. Maybe go into detail a bit more, because it seemed as though you cut your presentation short.

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  13. Great Question, awesome relating to real life,

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    1. and could be a little longer

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  14. Good presentation. I think you relied on the board too heavily but you made good points.

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  15. I like the real world examples and also that you should know what you want to say. You did a good job but you dragged your question on for a while.

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  16. Good questions and ideas. Good connections and eye contact.

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  17. Good points and good job on using the board

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  18. Nice opening question I like your statements it stood out

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  19. try to get more emotional like last time also you had a bit of weak start but then you leveled it out like last time. your ending was great! really good job of showing the problem and coming up with a solution and getting everyone involved. first time i thought this idea could actually work.

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  20. Good presentation and good speaking.

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  21. Good about presentation: Connects to everyone, great opening question, good clear points, good eye contact, great ending question, defend points really well, good eye contact, summarized video, got good discussion going

    Needs improving on presentation: lost your place but minor

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  22. way to dress up for the presentation, way to follow the prompt, way to look into the crowd.

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  23. Good eye contact
    Good fluent talking
    Good points to back up your argument
    Good ending question
    Good reason to ask ending question
    Good discussion with the class

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