tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post7502594605759664419..comments2014-01-31T12:00:17.300-08:00Comments on anthonyb2017: "Bully" by Lee HirschAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13602207891971621790noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-50888768244446347652013-10-11T08:13:23.047-07:002013-10-11T08:13:23.047-07:00great question and it was very open endedgreat question and it was very open endedAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-1813238466871421642013-09-20T08:04:39.338-07:002013-09-20T08:04:39.338-07:00I think you should keep your hands out of your poc...I think you should keep your hands out of your pockets and try not to use filler words as much.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-35367842142845262662013-09-20T08:03:56.169-07:002013-09-20T08:03:56.169-07:00I like that you know what your question is and als...I like that you know what your question is and also that you have two as well. I like that you know what you want to say. I like that you shared some of your personal life and what the school you went to was like. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-88989609673148953592013-09-20T08:03:39.872-07:002013-09-20T08:03:39.872-07:00Really good job! I agree 100 percent. I was always...Really good job! I agree 100 percent. I was always told that being in a group will prevent bullying.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-39156927655588382002013-09-20T08:03:03.140-07:002013-09-20T08:03:03.140-07:00Anthony-
I thought you did very good on your pres...Anthony-<br /><br />I thought you did very good on your presentation. One of the things I think you need to work on is to keep your hands out of your pockets. I also thought that you should stand up straight and stop bouncing up and down on your feet. Overall, it was a good presentation. I noticed you were using filler words (like or uh...).<br /><br />7Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-24516109664005765492013-09-20T08:02:47.673-07:002013-09-20T08:02:47.673-07:00I liked your question at the beginning that made m...I liked your question at the beginning that made me think a lot about bullying. But try taking your hands out of your pockets.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-13957951037567417052013-09-20T08:02:45.103-07:002013-09-20T08:02:45.103-07:00Good discussion. Good question.Good discussion. Good question.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00073320980769935658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-84065728134430172872013-09-20T08:02:38.297-07:002013-09-20T08:02:38.297-07:00very nice job
very nice job<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-55695631304060046292013-09-20T08:02:36.860-07:002013-09-20T08:02:36.860-07:00I like how you are showing a lot of emotion and co...I like how you are showing a lot of emotion and connecting the audience but showing both sides of it and how your showing all the stereotype answers of kids so everyone knows what your talking about and presenting solutions to the problems.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-64877406951146972572013-09-20T08:02:34.352-07:002013-09-20T08:02:34.352-07:00 liked it. Good ideas and I liked the way you had ... liked it. Good ideas and I liked the way you had notes on your phone and ready to go. MAde good connections to us on a day to day bases. Good questionCameron Gardnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17883564888962896239noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-72042271927296020382013-09-20T08:02:32.004-07:002013-09-20T08:02:32.004-07:00Good about presentation: Great opening question fo...Good about presentation: Great opening question for audience to think over, explains "Bully" really well, made good connection between "Bully" and audience, Had good notes, good examples and supporting details, good connection between presenter and personal experience, stayed still most of the presentation, good discussion <br /><br />Need improving on presentation: Uses "like" a lot, repeating a little, had in pockets most of the presentation Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-48639430385588811722013-09-20T08:02:27.540-07:002013-09-20T08:02:27.540-07:00Use your phone more than the board. Nice job speak...Use your phone more than the board. Nice job speaking about personal experience. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-91499796635893482762013-09-20T08:02:27.161-07:002013-09-20T08:02:27.161-07:00Very good. It made me really think about what i ha...Very good. It made me really think about what i have gone threw in life and what i have done to others. Also you had a very good question.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-78272079797300895792013-09-20T08:02:26.513-07:002013-09-20T08:02:26.513-07:00Good opening question to your presentation. Good T...Good opening question to your presentation. Good T-W connection about kids taking their lives. Make sure you keep your hands out of your pocket. Good T-S connection with your friends being bullied and you being bullied and being the bully. Good presentation and ending questions. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-72852230709316387002013-09-20T08:02:26.269-07:002013-09-20T08:02:26.269-07:00I think it was a good presentation. You made a goo...I think it was a good presentation. You made a good opener with asking bulling expression from the students. For the next time put your hands out of the pocket. But you worked good with the notes. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-50876577524268917562013-09-20T08:02:25.672-07:002013-09-20T08:02:25.672-07:00Good points on self connection. Good job showing t...Good points on self connection. Good job showing the rising concern of kids taking their lives. Good point with voice for voiceless. Great point about how people only notice bullying when it happens to them. Nice advice for what kids should do if they are bullied.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14923892363778203174noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-90447265122482288542013-09-20T08:01:57.422-07:002013-09-20T08:01:57.422-07:00Good start great question at the begging. Use your...Good start great question at the begging. Use your hands don't keep them in your pockets. Good job with the notes. Good job being prepared. Good concluding sentence. Good examples. good job. Nice way capturing your audience, good answers to their questions. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-79773053705279075722013-09-20T08:01:03.866-07:002013-09-20T08:01:03.866-07:00Nice attention getter. Nice connection back to you...Nice attention getter. Nice connection back to your old school. More personal connections. Great ending question.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-32505989739107106322013-09-20T08:00:17.559-07:002013-09-20T08:00:17.559-07:00I like that you seemed very connected to your writ...I like that you seemed very connected to your writing.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12249941068606601712noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-91992567190735678772013-09-20T07:59:05.843-07:002013-09-20T07:59:05.843-07:00Your sentences sounded very fluent. Try and take y...Your sentences sounded very fluent. Try and take your hands out of your pockets.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-58908472038744587892013-09-20T07:58:13.024-07:002013-09-20T07:58:13.024-07:00Awesome quotes. Good detail and explanation to wha...Awesome quotes. Good detail and explanation to what you feel and your response. But keep those hands out.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-36123967411000305242013-09-20T07:57:38.350-07:002013-09-20T07:57:38.350-07:00Good job with connecting with your life and good p...Good job with connecting with your life and good point of how they are on the inside not the outside.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00073320980769935658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-69952240101664488382013-09-20T07:57:08.566-07:002013-09-20T07:57:08.566-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-65789998220496886622013-09-20T07:56:29.725-07:002013-09-20T07:56:29.725-07:00hand out of pockets
hand out of pockets<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5408815019068271557.post-59451469973249681902013-09-20T07:56:03.924-07:002013-09-20T07:56:03.924-07:00Good start. Get your hands out of your pockets. Go...Good start. Get your hands out of your pockets. Good job using phone for notes. Bullying is a cycle. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00073320980769935658noreply@blogger.com